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My heart of glass
I held it out to you
I took a risk
I let go
But you didn't catch it
It fell
I watched as it shattered upon the floor
Little pieces sparkling sadly
Like the tear running down my cheek
My world shattered
A mirror reflection of all that I was
A reflection of what is no more
The shards sliced at my skin
As I tried to put them back together
But I fumbled as tears blurred my vision
Blood mixed with the pieces
But they wouldn't go back together
And some of them couldn't be found
It was cold
And empty
I couldn't put the pieces back together
I didn't understand
I faded away

My heart of glass
I held it out to you
But you let it fall
And now I am no more
©2007-2009 ~StrongEnoughToFly
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Author's Comments

I need a hug...


I was very down when I wrote this, and it just kinda jumped from my pencil. I didn't plan this out like the other one, so... please.... be gentle? ^^; I'm not a poet, and I've never really done poetry, I just found out recently it's a good way to vent! ^_^ Tell me if it sucks! ^^ And any advice would be great, whether it's grammer or whatever...

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You did very well, it explains very well how people feel after they were hurt

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me...well..it's me...uhh...yeah
:iconstrongenoughtofly:
*victory dance* Thanks! ^_^

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Everyone loves a vampire love story... [link]

Don't question my logic!!
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your welcome

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me...well..it's me...uhh...yeah

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